[RTG-DIR] FW: OPSDIR Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd
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From: Ron Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] FW: OPSDIR Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd
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Juniper Business Use Only From: Ron Bonica Sent: Thursday, April 16, 2020 11:29 AM To: ops-dir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd.all@ietf.org Subject: OPSDIR Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd Folks, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: Ready for publication Fully cooked. I would vote YES. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: None Juniper Business Use Only Juniper Business Use Only