[RTG-DIR] RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-21-txt
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From: John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-21-txt
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Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate "early" review of this draft. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis/ The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an "early" review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft's lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the stage that the document has reached. As this document is in working group last call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document is ready to be published. Please consider my comments along with the other working group last call comments. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Document: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-21.txt Reviewer: John Drake Review Date: 21-Oct-2022 Intended Status: Informational Summary: No issues found. This documents is ready to proceed to the IESG. Comments: The draft is both extremely well written and comprehensive. Yours Irrespectively, John Juniper Business Use Only
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