[RTG-DIR]Re: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-vendor-05

["Samuel Sidor (ssidor)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Mike,

Thanks a lot for your review and for comment/suggestion raised. I agree that it is cleaner to move IANA related statement to IANA Considerations section, so I moved it and modified a bit (I would still prefer to keep reference to RFC9371 as that contains direct location to PEN registry.

Can you please check if it is addressing your comment? I can submit it then.

Regards,
Samuel

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Subject: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-vendor-05

Reviewer: Mike McBride
Review result: Ready

Succinct and well written draft. It's ready. My only suggestion is adding a little more into the iana considerations section. Something like:

"There are no IANA actions in this document, only a clarification. [RFC7470] defines the Enterprise Numbers allocated by IANA and managed through an IANA registry [RFC2578]. This document clarifies the Private Enterprise Numbers
(PEN) as described in the IANA registry."

And/or re-word the iana description up in section 3. That second sentence "This document further clarifies that what the IANA registry described is the Private Enterprise Numbers (PEN), in which registrations and the registration location are further described by [RFC9371]." is awkward to me. Would this say the same
thing?:

"This document clarifies the Private Enterprise Numbers (PEN), as described in the IANA registry. The registrations, and the registration location, are further described by [RFC9371]."