[RTG-DIR]Re: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-14

["Linyi (Yi)" <[e-mail]>]

Dear Stewart,

Many thanks for the review and comment, which is really a very good point. A new section 2 was added to list all the abbreviations used in this document.

Please see the attached new version (-15) of this draft (will be submitted once the I-D submission tool is reopened), as well as the diff between -14 and -15. 

Please also note that there are some more modifications according to the comments from other reviewers.

Thank you.

B.R.
Yi LIN

HUAWEI France
Marco Polo A2, 790 Avenue Maurice Donat, 06250 Mougins France
http://www.huawei.com
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from HUAWEI, which
is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any use of the
information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total or partial
disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the intended
recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender
by phone or email immediately and delete it!

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <[e-mail]> 
发送时间: 2024年7月2日 1:32
收件人: [e-mail]
抄送: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
主题: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-14

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

This is a well written document and is OK for publication.

I do have one concern, and that it is a rich soup of three/four/five letter acronyms and it is very difficult to verify that all are either (a) formally exempt from the need for expansion in https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=abbrev_list, or (b) have been expanded elsewhere in the text. This might be best addressed by including a glossary early in the document in which all the acronyms are expanded and ideally referenced. This would make the document more accessible to an audience that is not already familiar with the content.