Re: [RTG-DIR] [v6ops] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras

Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net> Thu, 21 June 2018 23:41 UTC

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From: Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net>
To: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] [v6ops] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras
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Hi Jen
Thanks for your update of the doc.
Regards
Ravi


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jen Linkova [mailto:furry13@gmail.com]
> Sent: Monday, June 18, 2018 1:38 AM
> To: Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net>
> Cc: rtg-ads@ietf.org; rtg-dir@ietf.org; v6ops@ietf.org; draft-ietf-v6ops-
> conditional-ras@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [v6ops] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras
> 
> Hi Ravi,
> 
> My apologies for the delay with addressing issues you raised in your review!
> I've just uploaded -05 version,
> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-
> 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dv6ops-2Dconditional-
> 2Dras_&d=DwIFaQ&c=HAkYuh63rsuhr6Scbfh0UjBXeMK-
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> Bod8GY3XUVNr2huna8XLxu4KCRXRiBHmAxVw&e=
> please let me know if it still has any issues.
> 
> On Tue, May 22, 2018 at 9:25 AM, Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net> wrote:
> > Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras
> > Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> should be considered prior to publication.
> >
> > Nits:
> >    d. Section 3.2.3: typo: quoted section # needs correction.
> >           " correct uplink based on the source address as described in Section
> 3.2.1."
> >            ->
> >          "correct uplink based on the source address as described in Section
> 3.1.1."
> 
> The reference was actually correct, I've updated the wording to make it more
> clear.
> 
> > 4. Section 3.3 & 3.4: the text seems to indicate that this draft if proposing
> some solution, even though as indicated in this draft's abstract….the solution
> being referenced is in ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming and this draft if
> describing the use of that solution in sample scenarios. Slight rewording of text
> should help to address this.
> 
> I've updated the abstract and the Introduction section to clarify that this draft
> provides a solution based on the general approach discussed in ietf-rtgwg-
> enterprise-pa-multihoming.
> 
> --
> SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry