[RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08.txt
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08.txt
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Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-08.txt Reviewer: Russ White Review Date: 19 February 2018 IETF LC End Date: 22 February 2018 Intended Status: Informational Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication. Comments: I (generally) find the eVPN drafts difficult to read, but this is mostly a style issue, rather than an issue with technical content or any specific grammar issue. Overall, however, this document is very useful in describing a use case for eVPN, including the control plane setup necessary, and packet forwarding. The draft appears to be technically correct in the process it describes. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: No minor issues found. 😊 /r