Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sr-over-ip

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Reviewer: Eric Gray
Review result: Ready

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-sr-over-ip-02
Reviewer: Eric Gray
Review Date: 25 January, 2019
IETF LC End Date: 25 January, 2019
Intended Status: Proposed Standard

Summary:
This document is ready for publication.

Comments:
    The document is well written and relatively easy to read.  It was also short and to the point.  Thanks to the authors for making this an easy review.

Major Issues:
    No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
    No minor issues found.

Nits:
    None.

Eric Gray