[RTG-DIR] RrgDir review: draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds-02
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RrgDir review: draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds-02
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Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-finding-geofeeds-02.txt Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review Date: 14 Feb 2021 IETF LC End Date: unknown Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: * No issues found. This document is ready for publication. Comments: The document is clear and readable. Thank you! I reviewed this from the perspective of document quality, readability, and usefulness. There are a few cases where the language used is a little more embellished than I would expect in a standards track document, but I do not think this detracts from the clarity of the specification. Major Issues: * "No major issues found." Minor Issues: * "No minor issues found."
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