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Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04.txt

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Mon, 15 February 2021 21:44 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 15 Feb 2021 16:44:45 -0500
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To: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04.txt
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Hi Stig,

See below at <DE>.

On Mon, Feb 15, 2021 at 12:27 PM Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> wrote:
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG
> review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is
> to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about
> the Routing Directorate, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
> it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
> IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them
> through discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04.txt
> Reviewer: Stig Venaas
> Review Date: 2021-02-15
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
> Intended Status: Informational
>
> Summary:
>
> This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> should be considered prior to publication.
>
> Comments:
>
> This is the best written draft I've read in a long time. Thanks for
> that! I could not find any issues, except one very minor nit.

Thanks!

> Nits:
>
> As mentioned in some other reviews, it might be good to add the term P
> to the terminology section.

Yeah, that change is in the working copy, will be uploaded soon.

Thanks,
Donald
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> Regards,
> Stig

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