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From: John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>
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Hello

I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.
​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-masque-ip-proxy-reqs/

The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of this early review is to ensure as wide of a review as possible

For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Document: draft-ietf-masque-ip-proxy-reqs-02.txt
Reviewer: John Drake
Review Date: 26-May-2021
Intended Status: None

Summary: 

No issues found.

Comments:

The draft is concise, complete, and well written.

Yours Irrespectively,

John


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