Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgRir review requested: draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-10.txt (Correcting alias)

Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com> Fri, 08 November 2019 17:16 UTC

To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, "rtg-ads@ietf.org" <rtg-ads@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgRir review requested: draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-10.txt (Correcting alias)
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Hi Stuart,

thanks for the review.

I will address your comments in a next re-spin of the draft.

thanks,
Peter

On 08/11/2019 17:40, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> Thanks Stewart for the review!
> 
> I did a search on MPLS-TE RFCs and it is, in fact, hyphenated in most 
> instances. I’m sure the authors will incorporate your comments in the 
> next revision.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Acee
> 
> *From: *rtg-dir <rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Stewart Bryant 
> <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Thursday, November 7, 2019 at 1:07 PM
> *To: *"rtg-ads@ietf.org" <rtg-ads@ietf.org>
> *Cc: *Routing Directorate <rtg-dir@ietf.org>, 
> "draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse.all@ietf.all" 
> <draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse.all@ietf.all>, "Yemin (Amy)" 
> <amy.yemin@huawei.com>, LucAndré Burdet <laburdet.ietf@gmail.com>, 
> Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Subject: *[RTG-DIR] RtgRir review requested: 
> draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-10.txt
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. 
> The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related 
> drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and 
> sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide 
> assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing 
> Directorate, please see  
> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir> 
> <https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir%3E>  
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
> 
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it 
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF 
> Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through 
> discussion or by updating the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-10.txt
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> 
> Review Date: 2019-10-07
> 
> IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
> 
> Intended Status: Standard Track
> 
> Summary:
> 
> I apologies for the delay.
> 
> I found version 10 to be well written.
> 
> WRT Daniele’s question of whether this is needed. I think the text in 
> the introduction substantiates a need and I am inclined to support 
> publication.
> 
> Major issues: none
> 
> Minor issues: none
> 
> Editorials:
> 
> (e.g., SRTE,
> 
>     LFA)
> 
> SB> The terms SRTE and LFA need to be expanded in the abstract.
> 
> OSPFv3 when MPLS TE and GMPLS are not deployed or are deployed in
> 
> SB> Should be MPLS-TE (well know term)
> 
> - Stewart
>

Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgRir review requested: draft-ietf… Acee Lindem (acee)
Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgRir review requested: draft-ietf… Peter Psenak