[RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08.txt

Ben Niven-Jenkins <ben@niven-jenkins.co.uk> Tue, 12 March 2019 00:08 UTC

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I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08.txt
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review Date: 11th March 2019
IETF LC End Date: 18th March 2019
Intended Status:  
Best Current Practice

Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments: The document describes the structure of IASA 2.0 and is well written and easy to read.

Major Issues: No major issues found.

Minor Issues: No minor issues found.

Nits: Section 1, Introduction, paragraph 6 uses “IETF Administration LLC Executive Director” when the terminology section (4.1) uses “IETF LLC Executive Director”.