Return-Path: X-Original-To: rtg-dir@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: rtg-dir@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 01486131251; Mon, 11 Mar 2019 17:08:34 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -0.308 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.308 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DATE_IN_PAST_03_06=1.592, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id k-5D1FdpY-Tj; Mon, 11 Mar 2019 17:08:29 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mailex.mailcore.me (mailex.mailcore.me [94.136.40.146]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 791CF131278; Mon, 11 Mar 2019 17:08:26 -0700 (PDT) Received: from 50-201-223-3-static.hfc.comcastbusiness.net ([50.201.223.3] helo=[10.20.6.64]) by smtp03.mailcore.me with esmtpa (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1h3Uxy-00016Z-Jn; Tue, 12 Mar 2019 00:08:23 +0000 From: Ben Niven-Jenkins Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 12.1 \(3445.101.1\)) Message-Id: <19F57D35-A560-489A-97EF-FC290D3E3345@niven-jenkins.co.uk> Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2019 19:53:42 +0000 Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis.all@ietf.org To: " (rtg-ads@ietf.org)" X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3445.101.1) X-Mailcore-Auth: 9600544 X-Mailcore-Domain: 172912 X-KLMS-Rule-ID: 1 X-KLMS-Message-Action: clean X-KLMS-AntiSpam-Status: not scanned, license restriction X-KLMS-AntiPhishing: not scanned, license restriction X-KLMS-AntiVirus: Kaspersky Security 8.0 for Linux Mail Server, version 8.0.1.721, bases: 2019/03/11 14:10:00 #9341355 X-KLMS-AntiVirus-Status: Clean, skipped Archived-At: Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08.txt X-BeenThere: rtg-dir@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Routing Area Directorate List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 12 Mar 2019 00:08:39 -0000 Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. = The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related = drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and = sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide = assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing = Directorate, please see = http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it = would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF = Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through = discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08.txt Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins Review Date: 11th March 2019 IETF LC End Date: 18th March 2019 Intended Status: =20 Best Current Practice Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication. Comments: The document describes the structure of IASA 2.0 and is well = written and easy to read. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: No minor issues found. Nits: Section 1, Introduction, paragraph 6 uses =E2=80=9CIETF = Administration LLC Executive Director=E2=80=9D when the terminology = section (4.1) uses =E2=80=9CIETF LLC Executive Director=E2=80=9D. Regards Ben