[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04

Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 27 April 2022 15:45 UTC

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Subject: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04

Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Ready

The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written.
Thank you!

I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows:

Section 2.2:
"..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through',
to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting
diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be
diverted away..."

Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV
Please expand 'LLS' on first use.

Section 6 Procedures, first bullet
"..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by
any of its neighbors on any of its links..."

[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-l… Matthew Bocci via Datatracker
Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ie… Acee Lindem (acee)
Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ie… Ketan Talaulikar
Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ie… Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)