Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-v6-24

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Diffs for draft nits attached. 

On 3/23/21, 10:19 AM, "rtg-dir on behalf of Acee Lindem via Datatracker" <rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Reviewer: Acee Lindem
    Review result: Has Nits

    Hello,

    I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
    The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
    drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and
    sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide
    assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing
    Directorate, please see  

      http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

    Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
    it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
    IETF Early Review/Last Call  comments that you receive, and strive to
    resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

    Document: draft-ietf-opsec-v6-24.txt
    Reviewer: Acee Lindem
    Review Date: 03/23/2021
    IETF LC End Date: Soon
    Intended Status:  Informational

    Summary: The document contains a lot of useful recommendations and
             references for Operational Security in IPv6 networks. Since
             the document has "Informational" status, none of the text is
             normative.

             The document is basically ready for publication. I have some
             nits attached and a have couple suggested references for
             IPv6 control plane security.

    Major Issues: None

    Minor Issues:

        1. Section 2.4 - Recommend implementation of key-chains and graceful
           key rollover as documented in section 2.2 of RFC 8177. This will
           avoid the disruptions during key rollover.

        2. Section 2.4 - Recommend implementation of SPF rate-limiting as
           documented in RFC 8541. This is in the context of OSPFv3 protocol
           specific mechanisms and the recommended rate-limiting.

    Nits: Will send diffs in separate message.