[RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext
Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> Thu, 30 January 2020 14:09 UTC
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext
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Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext-05 Reviewer: Tal Mizrahi Review Date: January 30th, 2020 Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has two minor issues that should be considered prior to publication. Comments: The document is well-written and clear, even to the non-expert reader. The examples are highly appreciated. Minor issues: - The following definition in the "Terminology" section is recursive, and not very clear at this point in the document (it becomes clearer only after the "Definitions" section). It would be highly recommended to rephrase this: 'YANG data structure: A data structure defined with the "structure" statement.' - The "Definitions" section seems to define a single term, the YANG data structure. It would be best to rename the section. Cheers, Tal Mizrahi.