[RTG-DIR]RtgDir Review for draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing

Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> Sat, 25 May 2024 10:42 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.

Document:  draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
Reviewer: Tony Przygienda
Intended Status: Informational

*Summary:*

In short, the draft has been a pleasure to read. It is well structured,
informative and carefully laid out presenting actually a good overview of
the whole network slicing & service modelling jungle of drafts so overall,
time well spent for me ;-)

*Comments:*

Only thing to remark is that the draft references a lot in-flight drafts in
section 4 and given that, after publication the ground may move and it may
lose relevance to an extent. I do not consider that likely.

*Major Issues:*

*None*

*Minor Issues:None*

*Nits:*

Polished, easy on the eye language, nothing sprung out.