[RTG-DIR]Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06

"Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com> Thu, 08 August 2024 15:59 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06
Reviewer: Jia He
Review Date: August 8, 2024
IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
This document is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. It is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication.

No major issues found.

No minor issues found.

Nits:
1、Section 1, s/a 3 bit "PCP" field/a 3-bit "PCP" field, s/a 12 bit VLAN identifier (VID) field/a 12-bit VLAN identifier (VID) field
2、Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14" with the latest version.

B.R.
Jia

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Daniam Henriques via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
发送时间: 2024年6月29日 16:03
收件人: Hejia (Jia) <hejia@huawei.com>
抄送: Daniam.Henriques@liquid.tech; Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>
主题: For He Jia, Rtgdir Last Call review by 2024-08-08 assigned: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension

Last Call review of: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension (no specific version)
Deadline: 2024-08-08
Pages: 7
Requested by: Jim Guichard

http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension/reviewrequest/19874/login/

Daniam Henriques has assigned He Jia as a reviewer for this document.

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