[RTG-DIR] RtgDir Review: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis

Manav Bhatia <manavbhatia@gmail.com> Fri, 07 December 2018 10:45 UTC

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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir Review: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis
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Hi,



I have done a routing directorate review of this draft.



https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis/



The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir



Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
discussion or by updating the draft.



Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis

Reviewer: Manav Bhatia

Review Date: 7 Dec 2018

Intended Status: Proposed Standard



Summary:

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.



Comments:

I have a minor comment on whether the authors could add some text that
explains that the current mechanism only works when the restarting router
comes up in a short amount of time, which is basically for as long as the
Holdtimer does not expire on its neighbors. However, some restarts can take
longer, and this adds support for such restarts.



Thanks, Manav