[RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07

Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com> Mon, 29 April 2019 02:44 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07
Reviewer: Mach Chen
Review Date: 04/28/2019
IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:
This document is ready for publication. 

Comments:
This document is well-written and easy to read, it gives a comprehensive introduction on how to apply PCE for inter-domain path computation. 

Best regards,
Mach