[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08

[Ines Robles via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Has Nits

Hello,

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Document: draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08.txt
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 28th December 2020
IETF LC End Date: ---
Intended Status: Experimental

Summary:

This document defines a process experiment under RFC 3933 that temporarily
updates the criteria for qualifying volunteers to participate in the IETF
Nominating Committee.

The document is clear , I believe the document is ready. I just have some minor
comments/nits below

Major Issues: None
Minor Issues: None

Nits:

1-Abstract:

apply to one, or at most two, Nominating Committee cycles -> should be added
consecutive cycles?

2-Section 1:

It would be nice to expand the first time NomCom --> NomCom (Nominating
Committee)

3-Section 2:

the IESG must consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and the
2020-2021 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report --> the IESG must
consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report

4-Section 4:

Has been a Working Group Chair or Secretary within .... -> ... IETF/IRTF
Working Group Chair or Secretary?

nomcom -> NomCom

Thank you very much for this document,

Ines.