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[RTG-DIR]Re: RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18

"Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com> Wed, 06 November 2024 21:08 UTC

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From: "Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com>
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Again, thanks for taking my comments into consideration.

B.R.
Jia

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> 
发送时间: 2024年11月5日 19:18
收件人: Hejia (Jia) <hejia@huawei.com>
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主题: Re: RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18

Hi Jia,

On Thu, Aug 8, 2024 at 12:16 PM Hejia (Jia) <hejia=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Hello,
>
>  ...
>
> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18
> Reviewer: Jia He
> Review Date: August 8, 2024
> IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> Summary:
>
> This document is basically ready for publication. It is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. Most of the content in the draft is the same as in the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. The comments to the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension about the out-of-date references still apply.
>
> No major issues found.
>
> No minor issues found.
>
> Nits:
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> 1、  Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09" with the latest versions.

OK, we will update references.

Thanks,
Donald
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> B.R.
>
> Jia

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