[RTG-DIR]Re: Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06
Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sun, 03 November 2024 14:11 UTC
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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 03 Nov 2024 09:11:09 -0500
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Hi Jia, Thanks for the review. Sorry for the tardy reply. On Thu, Aug 8, 2024 at 11:59 AM Hejia (Jia) <hejia=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > Hello, > >... > > Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06 > Reviewer: Jia He > Review Date: August 8, 2024 > IETF LC End Date: date-if-known > Intended Status: Standards Track > > Summary: > This document is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. It is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. > > No major issues found. > > No minor issues found. > > Nits: > 1、Section 1, s/a 3 bit "PCP" field/a 3-bit "PCP" field, s/a 12 bit VLAN identifier (VID) field/a 12-bit VLAN identifier (VID) field OK. > 2、Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14" with the latest version. OK. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com > B.R. > Jia > > > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: Daniam Henriques via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org] > 发送时间: 2024年6月29日 16:03 > 收件人: Hejia (Jia) <hejia@huawei.com> > 抄送: Daniam.Henriques@liquid.tech; Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com> > 主题: For He Jia, Rtgdir Last Call review by 2024-08-08 assigned: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension > > > Last Call review of: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension (no specific version) > Deadline: 2024-08-08 > Pages: 7 > Requested by: Jim Guichard > > http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension/reviewrequest/19874/login/ > > Daniam Henriques has assigned He Jia as a reviewer for this document.
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