Re: [Rtg-dt-encap-considerations] draft-rtg-dt-encap-02 for review

Albert Tian <albert.tian@ericsson.com> Thu, 21 May 2015 15:59 UTC

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From: Albert Tian <albert.tian@ericsson.com>
To: Erik Nordmark <nordmark@sonic.net>, "rtg-dt-encap-considerations@ietf.org" <Rtg-dt-encap-considerations@ietf.org>
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Hi Erik

Just a comment on the control word topic: I think the document looks pretty good in the next protocol section, maybe with a minor suggestion for the following sentence at the top of page 10:

"
That behavior places some constraints on other
payloads carried over MPLS and some protocol define an initial
control word in the payload with a value of zero in its first nibble [RFC4385] to avoid confusion with IPv4
and IPv6 payload headers.
"

Thanks,
Albert




On 5/14/15, 11:00 AM, "Erik Nordmark" <nordmark@sonic.net<mailto:nordmark@sonic.net>> wrote:

Attached is -02 of the document.

Albert said he would check whether there are some additional text we
want to add about the control word, but I've completed the other edits
we have discussed.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OvGxiNTPuncHl1N-6JH-6MJvZ3D9PK1LpjwsRgArgJ8/
is up to date with the issues, but doesn't have the exact same proposed
text changes as the I-D.

I edited the attached diffs to remove the diffs related to the change in
pagination.

Please review the changes, and check whether there are additional things
we should lift out to the "In summary" bulleted lists.

It would be good to submit this next week - if anything controversial
shows up we can discuss it on the call next Thursday.

Regards,
    Erik