[Rtg-dt-encap-considerations] draft-rtg-dt-encap-02 for review

Erik Nordmark <nordmark@sonic.net> Thu, 14 May 2015 18:00 UTC

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Subject: [Rtg-dt-encap-considerations] draft-rtg-dt-encap-02 for review
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Attached is -02 of the document.

Albert said he would check whether there are some additional text we 
want to add about the control word, but I've completed the other edits 
we have discussed.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OvGxiNTPuncHl1N-6JH-6MJvZ3D9PK1LpjwsRgArgJ8/ 
is up to date with the issues, but doesn't have the exact same proposed 
text changes as the I-D.

I edited the attached diffs to remove the diffs related to the change in 
pagination.

Please review the changes, and check whether there are additional things 
we should lift out to the "In summary" bulleted lists.

It would be good to submit this next week - if anything controversial 
shows up we can discuss it on the call next Thursday.

Regards,
    Erik