[Rtg-yang-coord] Comments on draft-zheng-intarea-tunneling-for-ipv6-yang-00

Mandy Liu <mandy.liu@ericsson.com> Tue, 07 July 2015 10:18 UTC

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Subject: [Rtg-yang-coord] Comments on draft-zheng-intarea-tunneling-for-ipv6-yang-00
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Hi Guangying,

Here are some comments for draft-zheng-intarea-tunneling-for-ipv6-yang-00.


-          I suggest that if GRE, ISATAP won't be included in this draft, you could remove them from the "introduction".

-          Why use "feature" statement to describe "tunneling-for-ipv6"?

-          Typo on "feeture".

-          Why there is no a field be used to address the routing-instance reference?

Regards,
Mandy