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Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-11: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Fri, 02 August 2019 02:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-11: (with COMMENT)
From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Thu, 01 Aug 2019 22:12:55 -0400
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Thanks!
Alissa

> On Aug 1, 2019, at 9:28 PM, Jen Linkova <furry@google.com> wrote:
> 
> On Fri, Aug 2, 2019 at 3:44 AM Alissa Cooper via Datatracker
> <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS. I think the disclaimer in Section 6 about
>> default address selection is sufficient to address remaining concerns about the
>> use of the term "host" throughout Section 6. I think Section 6 might be
>> slightly improved if the section headings that talk about "source address
>> selection" instead said "default source address selection."
>> 
>> I agree with the Gen-ART reviewer that a forward reference to Section 8.3 in
>> the last sentence of Section 6.7.1 would be useful.
> 
> I've submitted the updated version:
> - the section headings in Section 6 are updated;
> - a sentence is added to the end of Section 6.7.1 with a reference to
> Section 8.3
> 
> Thank you for your comments!
> 
> -- 
> sincerely yours,
> Jen Linkova a.k.a Furry
> Network Engineer

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