Re: Re. Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt

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Subject: Re: Re. Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
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----- Original Message -----
From: <hu.fangwei@zte.com.cn>
To: <ietfa@btconnect.com>; <rtgwg@ietf.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 27, 2018 7:04 AM

> Hi, Petch
>
> A new version draft has been submitted to the IETF website to fix your
comments. We add the descriptions of security consideration section.
>
> More comments are appreciatedly welcomed. Thanks.

Since you are asking:-)

Imports into the yang modules must have a reference in the Reference
section of the I-D to the RFC/I-D from which they are being imported

The RFC/I-D must then have a I-D style reference to them lest they be
listed as unused references but this reference cannot appear in the YANG
module since that must be standalone plain text .

So the text of the I-D must contain the references.

draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model shows you one way of doing this.

You must have an IANA Considerations to register the namespace and the
XML - again
draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model
shows how this might be done.

The Abstract contains the abbreviation BNG which I do not think well
enough known yet for it not to be spelled out.

Tom Petch

>
> A new version of I-D, draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-02.txt
>
> has been successfully submitted by Fangwei Hu and posted to the
>
> IETF repository.
>
>
>
>
> Name:        draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model
>
> Revision:    02
>
> Title:        YANG Data Model for Configuration Interface of
Control-Plane and User- Plane separation BNG
>
> Document date:    2018-02-26
>
> Group:        Individual Submission
>
> Pages:        32
>
> URL:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-m
odel-02.txt
>
> Status:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model
/
>
> Htmlized:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-02
>
> Htmlized:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-
model-02
>
> Diff:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-mode
l-02
>
>
>
>
> Abstract:
>
>    This document defines the YANG data model for operation management
of
>
>    Control-Plane and User-Plane separation BNG.
>
>
>
>
>
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>
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>
>
> Regards.
>
>
> Fangwei.
>
>
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>
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> 发件人: <ietfa@btconnect.com>;
> 收件人:胡方伟10075772;
> 抄送人: <rtgwg@ietf.org>;
> 日 期 :2018年01月30日 21:27
> 主 题 :Re: Re: I-D Action:
draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
>
>
> Fangwei
>
> I don't know if you are familiar with
>    Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of YANG Data Model Documents
>                     draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-16
> but that is where I look for the latest on red tape for YANG modules.
>
> It is in Last Call and so is reasonably stable.
>
> It is rather big but can be dipped into to find e.g. what is needed
for
> the section on Security Considerations.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: <hu.fangwei@zte.com.cn>
> To: <ietfa@btconnect.com>
> Cc: <rtgwg@ietf.org>
> Sent: Monday, January 29, 2018 1:21 AM
>
> > Hi, Petch
> >
> >
> > Thanks for your comments, I will update the draft to fix the
> questions.
> >
> >
> > Regards
> >
> >
> > Fangwei.
> >
> >
> >
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> >
> > 原始邮件
> >
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> >
> > 发件人: <ietfa@btconnect.com>;
> > 收件人: <rtgwg@ietf.org>;
> > 抄送人:胡方伟10075772;
> > 日 期 :2018年01月27日 01:45
> > 主 题 :Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
> >
> >
> > This I-D is still lacking some basics e.g. you cannot have a YANG
> module
> > without IANA Considerations or without Security Considerations nor
are
> > most of the necessary Normative References listed..
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> > To: <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
> > Sent: Thursday, January 25, 2018 7:56 AM
> >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > >
> > >
> > >         Title           : YANG Data Model for Configuration
> Interface
> > of Control-Plane and User- Plane separation BNG
> > >         Authors         : Fangwei Hu
> > >                           RongRong Hua
> > >                           Shujun Hu
> > > Filename        : draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
> > > Pages           : 30
> > > Date            : 2018-01-24
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >    This document defines the YANG data model for operation
> management
> > of
> > >    Control-Plane and User-Plane separation BNG.
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > >
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model
> > /
> > >
> > > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > >
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01
> > >
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-
> > model-01
> > >
> > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > >
> >
>
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-mode
> > l-01
> > >
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