RE: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: (with COMMENT)

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From: Xufeng Liu <Xufeng_Liu@jabil.com>
To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Benoit,

Thanks for the comments. We have updated the document to address these comments, in a new revision https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-09. Please check if this is ok.

Regards,
- Xufeng

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Benoit Claise [mailto:bclaise@cisco.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, January 9, 2018 3:35 AM
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> Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp@ietf.org; Yingzhen Qu
> <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>; rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org; yingzhen.qu@huawei.com;
> rtgwg@ietf.org; rkrejci@cesnet.cz
> Subject: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08: No Objection
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> - I support Kathleen's DISCUSS.
> 
> - I like the way sections 2.2 and 2.3 are constructed. Thanks.
> In section 2.4 that's a pity that we don't see which per instance oper states and
> stats are available.
> 
>          +--ro <per instance operational states>
>             +--ro statistics
>                +--ro <per instance statistics>
> 
> I have to refer to an appendix to find the answer
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08#appendix-A Why don't
> you have the full tree as from the appendix in 2.X?
> 
> - No need to include the WG chairs in the YANG module, as per 6087bis
> 
>         WG Chair: Jeff Tantsura
>                   <mailto:jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
> 
>         WG Chair: Chris Bowers
>                   <mailto:cbowers@juniper.net>
> 
> - The following two references must point to the working group documents
> 
>    [I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis]
>               Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for Interface
>               Management", draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7223bis-00 (work in
>               progress), August 2017.
> 
>    [I-D.bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis]
>               Bjorklund, M., "A YANG Data Model for IP Management",
>               draft-bjorklund-netmod-rfc7277bis-00 (work in progress),
>               August 2017.
> 
> - Thanks for the appendix B. It's always useful.
> Note: I have not validated the instance.
>