Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt

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This I-D is still lacking some basics e.g. you cannot have a YANG module
without IANA Considerations or without Security Considerations nor are
most of the necessary Normative References listed..

Tom Petch

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
>
>
>         Title           : YANG Data Model for Configuration Interface
of Control-Plane and User- Plane separation BNG
>         Authors         : Fangwei Hu
>                           RongRong Hua
>                           Shujun Hu
> Filename        : draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
> Pages           : 30
> Date            : 2018-01-24
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines the YANG data model for operation management
of
>    Control-Plane and User-Plane separation BNG.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model
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model-01
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