Re: WG adoption poll for draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model-07

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Tue, 04 December 2018 11:09 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: WG adoption poll for draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model-07
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Viewed as a YANG module, there are a number of defects in this I-D.  I
think that the flavour is well illustrated by:

- s.5 This document defines five YANG modules
The Table of Contents lists seven

Copyright statements are all 2014.

revision date of  s.6.1  is 2016-03-03

yang-version is a mixture of 1 and 1.1

IANA gets no mention, not even a TBD.

No mention of NMDA

The modules are devoid of any YANG reference statements, either for
import or for description.

No reference for Tree Diagrams.

No current reference for YANG itself or Interface Management

The (unanswered) technical question is why have so many modules; I am a
fan of separate modules for YANG types and YANG identities, since I see
them as having a different evolution, but that is not done here; rather,
the functionality is broken up, leading to more YANG prefixes, modules
that are more complex. Why?

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Jeff Tantsura" <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
To: "RTGWG" <rtgwg@ietf.org>
Cc: "Routing WG" <rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org>
Sent: Saturday, December 01, 2018 2:30 AM
Subject: WG adoption poll for draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model-07


> Dear RTGWG,
>
> The authors have requested RTGWG to adopt
draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model as the working group document.
> The draft has received support during IETF101 meeting, authors have
addressed all the comments received.
>
> Please indicate support or no-support by December 15, 2018.
>
> If you are listed as a document author or contributor please respond
to this
> email stating of whether or not you are aware of any relevant IPR.
> The response needs to be sent to the RTGWG mailing list. The document
will not
> advance to the next stage until a response has been received from each
> author and each individual that has contributed to the document..
>
> Cheers,
> Jeff & Chris
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