Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07

Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Mon, 04 December 2017 23:23 UTC

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From: Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com>
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2017-12-04
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need
both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same
description "to detect interface connectivity failures".  What kind of
"connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what
connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"?

Thanks, Linda Dunbar

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