Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06

Roni, thanks for your review. Stephane, thanks for agreeing to make fixes. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Sep 27, 2017, at 9:09 AM, stephane.litkowski@orange.com wrote:
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> Thanks I will fix it in the next revision
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> From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com] 
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-09-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-04
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-12
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> 1. Abbreviation like RIB and FIB are not expanded 2. In section 9.1 "more simple" should be "simpler"
> 3. In section 9.1 " does not enough provide enough bandwidth"  to " does not provide enough bandwidth" 4. In section 9.2 "a mechanism where the convergence of the  network upon a topology change is made ordered to prevent transient forwarding loops"  is difficult to read maybe "a mechanism where the convergence of the network upon a topology change is ordered in order to prevent transient forwarding loops"
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