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From: Xufeng Liu <Xufeng_Liu@jabil.com>
To: Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com>, "draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp@ietf.org>, "rtgwg@ietf.org" <rtgwg@ietf.org>
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Hi Rob,

Thanks. The error has been fixed.

Also, after the discussions with the implementers, it has been agreed to remove the non-NMDA appendix.

Regards,
- Xufeng

From: Robert Wilton [mailto:rwilton@cisco.com]
Sent: Friday, October 27, 2017 5:12 AM
To: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp@ietf.org; rtgwg@ietf.org
Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-06.txt


Hi authors,

One minor nit, I think that you need to update the tree diagram to show that the top level "vrrp" container is config false.

E.g.

OLD:

   module: ietf-vrrp

      +--rw vrrp

         +--ro <global operational states>

         +--ro statistics

            +--ro discontinuity-datetime?   yang:date-and-time

            +--ro <global statistics>

NEW:



   module: ietf-vrrp

      +--ro vrrp

         +--ro <global operational states>

         +--ro statistics

            +--ro discontinuity-datetime?   yang:date-and-time

            +--ro <global statistics>

Otherwise, looks good to me!

Thanks,
Rob


On 26/10/2017 20:01, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:



A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.

This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group WG of the IETF.



        Title           : A YANG Data Model for Virtual Router Redundancy Protocol (VRRP)

        Authors         : Xufeng Liu

                          Athanasios Kyparlis

                          Ravi Parikh

                          Acee Lindem

                          Mingui Zhang

 Filename        : draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-06.txt

 Pages           : 42

 Date            : 2017-10-26



Abstract:

   This document describes a data model for Virtual Router Redundancy

   Protocol (VRRP).  Both version 2 and version 3 of VRRP are covered.





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