Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo-07: (with COMMENT)

[Mirja Kühlewind <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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1) Probably an editorial issue: "... SPF_DELAY to be restored to
INITIAL_SPF_DELAY. e.g., 3 seconds." 3 seconds? The previous text says
INITIAL_SPF_DELAY should be very short, e.g. 0 milliseconds...?

2) Also editorial: it would be helpful to show the state diagram right at the
beginning.