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Xufeng Liu <Xufeng_Liu@jabil.com> Sat, 16 December 2017 03:03 UTC

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From: Xufeng Liu <Xufeng_Liu@jabil.com>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: RE: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
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Hi Linda,

Thanks for the review. We have added some descriptions as you suggested, and posted an updated version of the draft https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08.

Thanks,
- Xufeng

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Linda Dunbar [mailto:linda.dunbar@huawei.com]
> Sent: Monday, December 4, 2017 6:25 PM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; rtgwg@ietf.org
> Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
> 
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready with Nits/Comments
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
> IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2017-12-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11
> 
> Summary:
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need
> both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same
> description "to detect interface connectivity failures".  What kind of
> "connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what
> connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"?
> 
> Thanks, Linda Dunbar
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