RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06

[Xufeng Liu <[e-mail]>]

Hi Roni,

Thanks for the review and comments.

We have posted a updated version https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-07, which contains the fixes for the two items that you listed below.

Thanks,
- Xufeng

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even [mailto:[e-mail]]
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-12-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1.  in section  4  " type enumeration {
>                enum 1 {
>                  description "IS-IS level 1 routes.";
>                }
>                enum 2 {
>                  description "IS-IS level 1  routes.";
>                }"
> 
> enum 2 is IS-IS level 2 routes
> 
> 2. In Appendix A , the figure with eth0 and the data tree with eth1. Also there is
> "ipv4-prefix": "198.51.100.0/24" which are not in the figure
>