shepherd review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-04

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com> Tue, 07 November 2017 18:59 UTC

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From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>
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Hi authors,

Please see attached shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-04. Is there any known implementation of the draft? I will update it in the write-up.

Also attached a word version of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-04 with editorial comments.

Same as LNE, one general comment: the examples in Appendix B need to be updated with NMDA compliance.

Thanks,
Yingzhen