Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 10 December 2017 10:49 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06
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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-12-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:
The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1.  in section  4  " type enumeration {
               enum 1 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1 routes.";
               }
               enum 2 {
                 description "IS-IS level 1  routes.";
               }"

enum 2 is IS-IS level 2 routes

2. In Appendix A , the figure with eth0 and the data tree with eth1. Also there
is "ipv4-prefix": "198.51.100.0/24" which are not in the figure

Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-… Roni Even
RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-y… Xufeng Liu