Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-11: (with COMMENT)

Jen Linkova <furry@google.com> Fri, 02 August 2019 01:28 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry@google.com>
Date: Fri, 02 Aug 2019 11:28:15 +1000
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Subject: Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-11: (with COMMENT)
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming@ietf.org, Ron Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>, Routing WG Chairs <rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org>, rtgwg@ietf.org, resnick@episteme.net
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On Fri, Aug 2, 2019 at 3:44 AM Alissa Cooper via Datatracker
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS. I think the disclaimer in Section 6 about
> default address selection is sufficient to address remaining concerns about the
> use of the term "host" throughout Section 6. I think Section 6 might be
> slightly improved if the section headings that talk about "source address
> selection" instead said "default source address selection."
>
> I agree with the Gen-ART reviewer that a forward reference to Section 8.3 in
> the last sentence of Section 6.7.1 would be useful.

I've submitted the updated version:
- the section headings in Section 6 are updated;
- a sentence is added to the end of Section 6.7.1 with a reference to
Section 8.3

Thank you for your comments!

-- 
sincerely yours,
Jen Linkova a.k.a Furry
Network Engineer