Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model
Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 31 July 2018 21:27 UTC
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Subject: Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model
From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
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Tom, Many thanks for your comments! Authors - I'd expect you to address them while the document is in adoption state. Tom - specifically to "flaky English" comment - your help to making the document better would be highly appreacited. Cheers, Jeff On 7/31/18, 02:01, "tom petch" <ietfa@btconnect.com> wrote: <rant> This I-D has some of the usual things wrong with it that need fixing at some state and, as ever, I like to see the editors fix at least some of them before adoption rather than leaving them until later, since they then seem to linger, perhaps until WG Last Call or IETF Last Call (yes, I am thinking of WG such as MPLS:-) There is a fundamental (to me) principle in engineering of get it right first time, or at least as early as possible; later means more expensive, more time consuming for everyone involved. I link this to the discussion on the main IETF list of the difficulty of finding ADs because so much time is involved in being an AD; yes, and part of that is us giving them poor quality documents with defects that could have been fixed even before adoption.. </rant> This I-D - fails to mention whether or not it is NMDA compliant in the Abstract and Introduction - fails to use the current definitions of terminology from RFC8342 - references the old version of RFC2119 key words - has no Note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace the YANG module dates with date of publication. I suggest a Note asking them to replace XXXX with the number assigned to this I-D at the start of the I-D rather than asking them to replace 'draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-02 ' which, should this I-D be adopted, will be wrong - has no Copyright statement in the YANG module - lacks references for several imported modules. - starts Section 4 well with a good sentence but fails to mention most imports - has serious formatting problems with the text in the YANG module with lines being way too long for an RFC (it is probably not a coincidence that other I-Ds have had the same problem - the right options in pyang fix this AFAIK) - has no IANA Considerations; no IANA Considerations means that you are not producing a YANG module no matter what it looks like. - Security Considerations are much better than usual but lack detail of sensitive nodes - Tree diagrams has the right reference but then spoils it by including text about the symbols - has out of date references [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis] [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis] which belie the claimed date of June 28, 2018 for this I-D; 2018-01-27 looks more like it:-) - has arp as a Informative Reference - Normative I think. I note that there is no IPV6 in the examples but that seems right since ARP is IPv4. The English is flaky in places but I am fine with that; that can be fixed once the text has been discussed and agreed - in fact there is no point in producing perfect English if we are then going to discuss and change it - whereas the points above can mostly be fixed before now. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jeff Tantsura" <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> To: "RTGWG" <rtgwg@ietf.org> Cc: "rtgwg-chairs" <rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org>; <draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model@ietf.org> Sent: Thursday, July 26, 2018 2:04 AM > Dear RTGWG, > > > > The authors have requested the RTGWG to adopt draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model as the working group document. > > The draft has been stable and provides all the additional arp pieces that are not in RFC8344, it has been presented at IETF 102 and no substantial comments have been received. > > > > Please indicate support or no-support by August 09, 2018 > > > > If you are listed as a document author or contributor please respond to this > > email stating of whether or not you are aware of any relevant IPR. > > The response needs to be sent to the RTGWG mailing list. The document will not > > advance to the next stage until a response has been received from each > > author and each individual that has contributed to the document. > > > > Cheers, > > Jeff & Chris >> _______________________________________________ > rtgwg mailing list > rtgwg@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg >
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Jeff Tantsura
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Robert Wilton
- Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-ya… Jeff Tantsura
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Acee Lindem (acee)
- RE: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… wangzitao
- RE: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Yingzhen Qu
- RE: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… dingxiaojian (A)
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Robert Wilton
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… tom petch
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… tom petch
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Zhengfeng (Habby)
- Re: Request for WG adoption - draft-ding-rtgwg-ar… Jeff Tantsura