Re: Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt

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Subject: Re: Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
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Fangwei

I don't know if you are familiar with
   Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of YANG Data Model Documents
                    draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-16
but that is where I look for the latest on red tape for YANG modules.

It is in Last Call and so is reasonably stable.

It is rather big but can be dipped into to find e.g. what is needed for
the section on Security Considerations.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
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> Hi, Petch
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> Thanks for your comments, I will update the draft to fix the
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> 收件人: <rtgwg@ietf.org>;
> 抄送人:胡方伟10075772;
> 日 期 :2018年01月27日 01:45
> 主 题 :Re: I-D Action: draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
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> This I-D is still lacking some basics e.g. you cannot have a YANG
module
> without IANA Considerations or without Security Considerations nor are
> most of the necessary Normative References listed..
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> Tom Petch
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> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> >         Title           : YANG Data Model for Configuration
Interface
> of Control-Plane and User- Plane separation BNG
> >         Authors         : Fangwei Hu
> >                           RongRong Hua
> >                           Shujun Hu
> > Filename        : draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01.txt
> > Pages           : 30
> > Date            : 2018-01-24
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> > Abstract:
> >    This document defines the YANG data model for operation
management
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> >    Control-Plane and User-Plane separation BNG.
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> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model
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> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
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https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-model-01
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-
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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-hu-rtgwg-cu-separation-yang-mode
> l-01
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