Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02
Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net> Mon, 08 May 2017 06:11 UTC
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From: Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net>
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Hi
I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft.
I've reviewed the same.
This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element module.
Some minor comments that should be addressed:
a. Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts.
b. Some TBDs need to be populated:
i. Security considerations section
ii. An error-code in section 6
Regards
Ravi
- Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02 Ravi Singh
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02 Lou Berger