Re: [Rum] WGLC for draft-ietf-rum-rue-07 - words left out

Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net> Thu, 26 August 2021 21:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rum] WGLC for draft-ietf-rum-rue-07 - words left out
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Yes.  I will fix that.  Thanks for spotting it.

Brian


> On Aug 26, 2021, at 5:09 PM, Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Good to see rum-rue get to the wglc state. 
> 
> Before taking a deeper look, I just want to convey an observation of a couple of words left out between version -06 and -07.
> 
> In section 5.2.3, 3rd line from the end,   "for an example ..."   s.b.  "Please refer to [RFC6442] for an example ..."
> 
> It seems to me that "Please refer to [RFC6442]" just happened to be dropped. Right?
> 
> Gunnar
> 
> --------------------------------
> 
> Den 2021-08-26 kl. 19:05, skrev Paul Kyzivat:
>> [Speaking as a RUM WG chair] 
>> 
>> This message announces the start of WGLC (Working Group Last Call) for draft-ietf-rum-rue-07. 
>> 
>> The end of this WGLC will be midnight UTC on September 12, 2021. 
>> (That is roughly two weeks, rounded up to a week boundary.) 
>> 
>> The energy level in the wg has been low. This WGLC is to help us move to wrap things up. The comments that have been posted for the last few days will be treated as WGLC comments. If you have made comments recently please review to see if they are impacted by the changes in -07 and if so update your comments. (I don't think any are.) 
>> 
>> Starting on Monday morning September 13 we will assess where we stand based on WGLC comments. If discussion has been robust but incomplete we MAY further extend the WGLC. 
>> 
>>     Thank you, 
>>     Paul Kyzivat 
>> 
>> On 8/26/21 12:09 PM, Brian Rosen wrote: 
>>> This version: 
>>> Changes jCard to xCard 
>>> Says ICE candidates with specific IP versions is allowed 
>>> Doesn’t require MWI support if voicemail is not supported (actually, 06 said that). 
>>> 
>>> I think the document is ready for work group last call. 
>>> 
>>> Brian 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Aug 26, 2021, at 12:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote: 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. 
>>>> This draft is a work item of the Relay User Machine WG of the IETF. 
>>>> 
>>>>         Title           : Interoperability Profile for Relay User Equipment 
>>>>         Author          : Brian Rosen 
>>>>     Filename        : draft-ietf-rum-rue-07.txt 
>>>>     Pages           : 33 
>>>>     Date            : 2021-08-26 
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract: 
>>>>    Video Relay Service (VRS) is a term used to describe a method by 
>>>>    which a hearing persons can communicate with deaf/Hard of Hearing 
>>>>    user using an interpreter ("Communications Assistant") connected via 
>>>>    a videophone to the deaf/HoH user and an audio telephone call to the 
>>>>    hearing user.  The CA interprets using sign language on the 
>>>>    videophone link and voice on the telephone link.  Often the 
>>>>    interpreters may be supplied by a company or agency termed a 
>>>>    "provider" in this document.  The provider also provides a video 
>>>>    service that allows users to connect video devices to their service, 
>>>>    and subsequently to CAs and other deaf/HoH users.  It is desirable 
>>>>    that the videophones used by the deaf/HoH/H-I user conform to a 
>>>>    standard so that any device may be used with any provider and that 
>>>>    video calls direct between deaf/HoH users work.  This document 
>>>>    describes the interface between a videophone and a provider. 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: 
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rum-rue/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rum-rue/> 
>>>> 
>>>> There is also an HTML version available at: 
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-rum-rue-07.html <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-rum-rue-07.html> 
>>>> 
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at: 
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rum-rue-07 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rum-rue-07> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
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>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/> 
>>>> 
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