Re: legalese versus plain english

JC Dill <jcdill@vo.cnchost.com> Mon, 19 June 2000 16:27 UTC

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From: JC Dill <jcdill@vo.cnchost.com>
Subject: Re: legalese versus plain english
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On 05:47 AM 6/19/00, Ted Gavin wrote:
 >-----Original Message------
 >From: "Donald E. Eastlake 3rd" <dee3@TORQUE.POTHOLE.COM>
 >To: IETF-RUN@MAILBAG.INTEL.COM
 >Sent: June 19, 2000 11:26:23 AM GMT
 >Subject: Re: legalese versus plain english
 >
 >I think if we just state
 >
 >"spamming often constitutes a criminal act, and can result in
 >fines, imprisonment and civil lawsuits for damages"
 >
 >as Donald has laid out, we'll be fine.

Perfect!

Thanks gang!

I'll work on sussing out the AOL cites and then I think we are set.

Do we need to get permission from the various websites to include the
reference URLs in the draft?

jc

 >
 >If we need to cite anything in more specificity, we can do so in an
 >Appendix, can we not?
 >
 >Ted