Subject: Re: [saag] draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis: YANG Security Template

From: "Salz, Rich" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2023 17:20:46 +0000

The Security template used in documents that specify YANG modules is stable since years now. FYI, we are in the process of preparing RFC8407bis, so we would welcome comments on that part: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-04#name-security-considerations-sec<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-04*name-security-considerations-sec__;Iw!!GjvTz_vk!Wi0wD9nwg7iZZAjTfkB7QqNL-LvuU6QVvwBGKkZahy-K6G4plm7jZnshBtJGUw7NF-qSUgKU5tVkz7JRZzGbTcQb$>

You should remove the word “especially” in the two places it’s used and “significant” from the privacy concerns item.

They do not make the intent more clear, and when you remove those words it still leaves the authors to have room for judgement.