[sacm] Review on draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-02

Adam Montville <adam.w.montville@gmail.com> Thu, 23 August 2018 15:25 UTC

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Subject: [sacm] Review on draft-ietf-sacm-ecp-02
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All:

Over the past few weeks I've been reviewing this draft and providing comments along the way to the draft authors. Now that I'm through the entire draft, I'm posting it here for the entire group to see. I apologize in advance if you have difficulty reading my annotations in the PDF.

Kind regards,

Adam