Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC
Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay <jmfmckay@gmail.com> Thu, 25 July 2019 14:59 UTC
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From: Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay <jmfmckay@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 25 Jul 2019 10:59:21 -0400
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Subject: Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC
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Thank you for the review, Jarrett. We will make the change. Jess On Fri, Jul 19, 2019 at 2:25 PM Jarrett Lu <jarrett.lu@oracle.com> wrote: > I have reviewed the current and previous version of this draft. I am in > support for this document to move forward to publication. > > I did notice a small nit in Sec. 1, "can made available" -> "can be made > available". > > Regards. > > - Jarrett > > >
- Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC Jarrett Lu
- Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay