[sacm] [sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid] CoSWID AD review edits (#33)

David Waltermire <notifications@github.com> Mon, 02 November 2020 15:41 UTC

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Subject: [sacm] [sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid] CoSWID AD review edits (#33)
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Edits to address AD review feedback from Roman Danyliw, with specific focus on CoSWID issues
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  https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/33

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  * edits to partially address AD review feedback from Roman Danyliw, with specific focus on SWID/CoSWID issues
  * Edits based on discussion with Henk and Charles
  * Fixed the capitolization of a few other stray &#39;section&#39; instances
  * Addressing most issues on github sans the combination of Section on hash with Section in resource-collection

-- File Changes --

    M Makefile (2)
    M concise-swid-tag.cddl (20)
    M draft-ietf-sacm-coswid.md (350)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/33.patch
https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/33.diff

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