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Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor

Jarrett Lu <jarrett.lu@gmail.com> Tue, 04 June 2019 19:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor
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Hope I am reviewing the latest version. I found a couple nits.

On page 5, the 2nd item of the software-descriptor information type doesn’t end correctly. 
o  Version and patching information: Version numbers, patch
      identifiers, or other information that

Page 5, words in wrong order? E.g.,
> any information that in is the abstract realm
“that in is” -> “that is in”


Otherwise the document looks good enough to be published. 

- Jarrett



> On Jun 4, 2019, at 7:19 AM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org <mailto:odonoghue@isoc.org>> wrote:
> 
> Folks,
> 
> This begins a two week working group last call for:
> Definition of the ROLIE Software Descriptor Extension
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor/>
> 
> Please review this document and send comments (including suitability to publish) to the mailing list. 
> 
> This WGLC will close on 19 June 2019. 
> 
> Thank you!
> Karen and Chris
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